Cutting parts of the film..

From having a talk with our teacher about how our film is and what he thinks about it, we cut the death scene of our film out, added extra titles and adjusted the music level at one part of the film.
It seems a lot better now, because I think it was a little hard to understand because you see a little eleven year old girl stalking a man then killing him. It now looks better because we have taken the whole body on the floor out, and it is just following her then you see her rolling a body off a cliff, it is more realistic and so much easier to understand, if you are the audience!!